I still don't think this story is too bad, but I know and have known that is flawed in some way. Bill O'Driscoll, the Arts and Entertainment editor of the City Paper, thinks that the below story ranks 44th. I'm not sure of how many, maybe 44. As a rule, your first attempt at publishing is a rejection. So thanks Bill for following that old cliche. And fuck you.  ¶ 3:12 PM